Read the sentence below. How would you correctly fix the run-on sentences?
Derek wanted a ferocious pit bull terrier to scare off burglars but his apartment
complex did not allow dogs as a result, Derek had to settle for naming his goldfish Mr.
Jaws and installing additional door locks.

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Answer 1

Answer:

I would put periods between the sentences and connect certain chunks of the sentences adding transition words like "additionally", "next", "lastly", etc.

Explanation:

Derek wanted a ferocious pit bull terrier to scare off burglars. As a result, his apartment complex did not allow dogs and had to settle for additional door locks to keep his place secure. Additionally, Derek kept his pet goldfish, Mr. Jaws to definitely keep his surroundings safe :)

Not sure if the gold fish is necessary and I don't have a lot of context but hope this helped i guess.


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Write a short Thank You note for Friends and Lecturers
(about 150 Words) ​

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Explanation:

hope it helps u...........

As this final school year winds down, I find myself thinking about a lot of the amazing experiences you've provided me. The rival sports games, the school concerts, and even just the simple "hello" in the hallway on some of my worst days.

I want to take a moment to thank you all, for I've grown in so many ways since I walked on campus four years ago.

Academically, so many of you have challenged me to go the extra mile; making that study date with my textbook and laptop at the coffee shop just another hour longer. For those of you who protested my opinions on issues in class debates; thank you for making me look deeper within my own mind and heart, and sometimes changing my own opinion in the wake of the ideas you presented me. The competition you provided me in the classroom taught me not to give up on myself; for I could master anything if I really set my mind to it and put in the work necessary.

mademe sofronie character is most developed throught

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Answer:

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In situations where life is difficult for the majority of the population, would you prefer to consume media that is fantasy/helps you escape from reality, or media that reflects on the current state of the world? Explain your position in a short paragraph (3-5 sentences).

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Answer:

Media That Reflects On The Current State Of The World.

Explanation:

In the coming future, there is no doubt that robots are going to play a large role in all aspects of our lives. (Photo courtesy of shay sowden/flickr)

Technology and the media are interwoven, and neither can be separated from contemporary society in most core and semi-peripheral nations. 

Media is a term that refers to all print, digital, and electronic means of communication.

please say this question's answer right now ​

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Answer:

1. fed

2. forgot

3. replied

4. nodded

5. trapped

6. cried

7. told

8. found

9. hit, shattered

10. heard

Answers:Masha fed the hens.Dabbu forgot to have a bath.Grandfather replied to my letter.The boys nodded their heads together.The strange animals were trapped in the hole.Alice cried so much that her tears made a pool.The boy never told lies.Birbal found a solution to the problem.The ball hit the window and it shattered.We heard unusual sounds last night.

Hope it helps.

Do comment if you have any query.

Does a large person always win each competition? Provide evidence to support your answer.

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Answer: No it all matters based on the person

Explanation:

If you had one smart smaller person up against a bigger person that isn’t as smart then the smaller has a better chance because they will use their head to win not just strength

why do farmers have to things differently than in the past

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Answer:

cause they didnt have the tools we have today

Answer:

There is different technology nowadays than there was in the past, the new technology makes it easier to farm. A good example is having weather forecast. Having a forecast available can tell the farmer if there will be bad storm giving them time to get the animals in a safe place.  

Explanation:

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How does the repetition in each stanza shape the meaning of Part I of "The Highwayman"?

A The repetition of the words galleon, breeches, cobbles, and cascade emphasizes the dreary setting.


B The repetition of the words riding, twinkle, daughter, or moonlight reinforces the highwayman's priorities.


C The repetition of the words trees, wrinkle, window, and perfume shows what is important to Bess.


D The repetition of the words inn-door, cocked-hat, to-night, and love-knot shows what is important to the landlord.


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Answer:

What is the story of the highwayman?

The poem, set in 18th-century rural England, tells the story of an unnamed highwayman who is in love with Bess, a landlord's daughter. Betrayed to the authorities by Tim, a jealous ostler, the highwayman escapes ambush when Bess sacrifices her life to warn him.

Explanation:

Answer:

The repetition of the words inn-door, cocked-hat, to-night, and love-knot shows what is important to the landlord.

Explanation:

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Situation : Imagine that you just graduated from high school and you are deciding the right course for you in college. There are people who are trying to discourage you with wnat you
have chosen At first, you were bothered by them, but now It motivates you to go through it
and maintain self-esteem. To be able to prove yourself. you have to meet the standards. As a
turitev. you bave to encourage readers to also enhance themselves by making a poem that will be shown to the readers for assessment
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Explanation:

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All of the following words can be used to describe Rivendell except...
O sympathetic
O hostile
O helpful
O peaceful

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Answer:d is correct

Explanation:hope this helps

The following words can be used to describe Rivendell's peaceful. option(D) is correct.

What is peaceful?

A peaceful life is one that is lived in harmony both inside and outside. It means that everything or everyone around you makes you feel content, and nothing or anybody can disturb this inner calm of yours. Even the Latin roots pax, or "peace," and facere, "to make," indicate that a pacifist is a peacemaker

In J. R. R. Tolkien's Middle-earth, Rivendell is a valley that serves as both a cozy haven and a fantastical Elvish otherworld. Being the starting point of the quest to destroy the One Ring, it is a significant location in both The Hobbit and The Lord of the Rings.

You experience tranquility, security, and relaxation while you're at peace. This sensation of safety and security that results from stillness shields you from stress even if there is any.

Therefore, option (D) is correct.

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why high mountain are covered with snow in winter season

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Answer:

because they're so tall, snow will naturally start gathering on them first.

Is an ELEMENT a
pure or non-pure
substance?

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Answer:

All elements are pure substances

Explanation:

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Answer:

All elements are pure substances. Sugar, salt, and baking soda are pure substances that are compounds

Explanation:

Examples of pure substances include tin, sulfur, diamond, water, pure sugar (sucrose), table salt (sodium chloride) and baking soda (sodium bicarbonate). Crystals, in general, are pure substances.

Tin, sulfur, and diamond are examples of pure substances that are chemical elements. All elements are pure substances. Sugar, salt, and baking soda are pure substances that are compounds. Examples of pure substances that are crystals include salt, diamond, protein crystals, and copper sulfate crystals.

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Answer:

A

Explanation:

What Happened Fella, Am Getting Messed

Answer:

its A

Explanation:

i did it

complet the conversation. use the simple present
1/....... you....... (live)alone?
no,I........
2/.............your apartment building.......have an elevater?
yes,it........

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Answer:

Do you live alone?

no, i am not

2)does your apartment have an elevatpr?

yes it does

Explanation:

What purpose does the bold-faced figurative language serve?

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Answer: bestie do we get more information than what was given?
explanation: please

In the first stanza of Robert
Frost's poem, what does
"guessed" rhyme with?
A. was
B. corner
C. rain
D. rest

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The answer is D. Rest

Help help English please please please

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Make an outline. I really hope this helps! Good luck!

which rhetorical device is used in the following statement from "Labour"?
"Know what thou canst work at; and work at it, like a hercules!"

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Answer:

chicken doody moody foody meow meow meow

Explanation:

the reason y it chicken doody moody food meow meow meow meow is because

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1. Identify the type of the underlined complement in the following sentence.

Through his own efforts he had become our (captain).

Predicate adjective

Predicate nominative

Direct object

indirect object

Object complement


2. Identify the part of speech of the underlined word in the sentence.

By cutting down those trees, you endanger (not only) the spotted owl (but also) the land itself.

interjection

coordinating conjunction

correlative conjunction

subordinating conjunction


3. Identify the complete subject in the following sentence.

All the stars will appear in the spring festival.

All

All the stars

the stars

in the spring festival


4. Identify the part of speech of the underlined word in the sentence.

The sun went (down) behind the hill.

interjection

conjunction

adverb

preposition


5. Identify the type of the underlined verb.

Following in the family tradition, Elizabeth (became) a pharmacist.

action verb

linking verb

transitive verb

intransitive verb


6. Identify the simple subject in the following sentence.

The habitats of plants and animals are often destroyed by deforestation.

plants

animals


The habitats


habitats


7. Choose the antecedent of the underlined pronoun in the following sentence.

Both of the actors gave superior performances. They captured the hearts of (their) audience.

actors

performances

hearts

audience


8. Identify the complete subject in the following sentence.

About two miles down the road is a modern hotel.

About two miles down the road

two miles down the road

a modern hotel

hotel


9. Identify the part of speech of the underlined word in the sentence.

The destructive flood stopped (there).


pronoun


adverb


adjective


noun

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Answer:

direct object indirect object

Explanation:

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I need help with this plz I really need dis

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Answer: 1: public personality

2: dark and creepy

Explanation: uhh I’m not sure really how to exsplain it I think by looking at the answers I gave you you will understand, if not lemme know I’ll try to help :)

B is taller than A, D is taller than C, C is taller than B, then who is shorter?​

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Answer:

A is the shortest...................

A is taller than B, but not as tall as C.

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Why Frederick go to the hospital​

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Answer:

?

Explanation:

Please can you expand on your question?

Please could you expand on answer so I can answer your question

How much money do you spend on buying clothes each month?​

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Answer:

this much

Explanation:

The average person spends around $161 per month on clothes – women spend nearly 76% more than men do on clothing in a year. The average family of four spends around $1800 per year on clothes, with $388 of this on shoes.

What is the differences of values of old and the new genarations of filipinos?​

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Today's youth tend to value material things more. They are quick to demand freedom and their human rights, while the older generation centered more on moral values, good manners and respect for others. ... Those of the older generation were more righteous.

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Pieter Brueghel, Kermesse (1567-8)
William Carlos Williams
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In Brueghel's great picture, The Kermess,
the dancers go round, they go round and
around, the squeal and the blare and the
tweedle of bagpipes, a bugle and fiddles
tipping their bellies (round as the thick-
sided glasses whose wash they impound)
their hips and their bellies off balance
to turn them. Kicking and rolling
about the Fair Grounds, swinging their butts, those
shanks must be sound to bear up under such
rollicking measures, prance as they dance
in Brueghel's great picture, The Kermess.
Return to the Poem Index

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Answer:

So, what is your question?

Explanation:

As the sun sank and darkness fell, hordes of gnats were attracted by the fire.
adjective clause
noun clause
adverb clause

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Answer: adverb clause

What’s the root word of reads, reading, reread

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Answer:

Re

Explanation:

the root word is read

Explanation:

All the words contain read

Write a well-developed introductory paragraph of four or more sentences. About the mnemiopsis jellyfish as a monster

Use an anecdote or quotation hook.

Write your thesis statement. This is your three-part idea that answers the question: What problems does my everyday monster cause, who does it affect, and how can it be solved?

states idea about the topic in one sentence

can be supported with valid evidence such as facts, expert testimony, and research

does not include feelings or emotions

is written in the third person point of view

Use correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling

Save your work to your computer or drive.

Submit your work in

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Answer:

that is so much work for someone else! how about you figure it out by ur self!!

Is this the correct answer, need to know, pls help!

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Yes the answer is B you got it corrected

Answer:

Yes, the correct Answer is Option "B".

Explanation:

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Learning Task 3: Read and analyze the texts below. Complete the table by
identifying the types of texts, their purposes and the signal words used. Do
this in your notebook.
Texts
Types Purposes
Signal
Words
1
warm
All crocodilians are reptiles with long
snouts, long tails, four short legs,
tough skin, and sharp teeth. Members
of the crocodilian family include
alligators, crocodiles, caimans, and
gavials. Crocodilians live in
weather throughout the year and they
spend part of their time in the water
and part of their time on land. Almost
all crocodilians grow to be very large,
with the largest more than twenty feet
long. There are two kinds of alligators,
14 kinds of crocodiles, eight kinds of
caimans, and one kind of gavial.
Source: Pike and Mumper (2004)
2
Recently, scientists have gained an
understanding of a crocodile's
reproductive activity. Crocodiles mate
in the water, where the buoyancy
keeps them from crushing each other.
Prior to mating, there are stylized
postures, jumping, submerged bubble
blowing, and snout contact. After
mating, hard-shelled eggs are laid in a
nest, in a hole scooped in the sand.
When it is time to hatch, the infant
crocodiles begin a loud chirping sound
that leads the female to the nest,

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The answer is nosir 5

1. I _______ listening to music after school

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Answer: I like/love listening to music after school

Explanation: I dont know what the options are but that's probably what the answer would be

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