Why should someone revise their writing by deleting information?
Select one:

The information is not related to the main idea of the paragraph or article.

The reader doesn't have enough information to understand the ideas.

The sentences are choppy and poorly organized.

There are a variety of sentence types.

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Answer 1
The answer should be the first one

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PLS HELP TEST IN 7 MIN
Complete the sentence with the correct word. Remember to spell correctly.



An oral _____ is a way for people to share stories and information with others.

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Answer:

An oral Storytelling is a way for people to share stories and information with others.

Tradition of storytelling? Good luck on your test.

May 21st is “Video Games Day.” Do you enjoy playing video games? Why or why not? What is your favorite game? And do you think that video games can help students? Please write at least 7 sentences.

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Bro what just answer that yourself

Answer:

Yes I do enjoy playing video games, and yes they can. There are a type of video games called educational games or games intended for learning and with the use of these people will often learn great deals from video games. (You're going to have to answer the favorite video game question yourself, and add a little more to make this the full 7 sentences)

Explanation:

Hope this helps a bit :)

If you have some spare time please help.

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AGREE

-because it’s good to be honest

-sometimes it can feel good

-Sometimes it can be a compliment

DISAGREE

-the truth might not be good

-you might get in trouble

-it might offend someone

agree:
- you may be rewarded for telling the truth
- telling the truth may release stress
- you may feel bad for lying/keeping a lie
disagree:
- you may get into trouble for telling the truth
- someone may get hurt mentally or physically by telling the truth


it’s not very helpful, but I tried :)

Tell me your favorite KPOP group and bias. Mine ATEEZ/Seonghwa

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Answer:

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My fav group - BTS!!!!!!

My bias - All the 7 members !!!!!!!!!

I love ATEEZ too ❤️ Wooyoung is my bias there ✌️

it's literally the exact same as yours lol

This question has two parts. First, answer Part A. Then, answer Part B.

Part A
Which of the following sentence pairs utilizes assonance and consonance?

A.
She waves her hand to say “Stacy!” to a friend waiting to play. He can’t suspect that she meant to contact a cat.

B.
She needs to wear beads if she leads the parade. He would want to whimper for that.

C.
She sails seven ships on the salty seas. He hates haughty humans.

D.
She taught ball to all the college stars. He doesn’t know how to play ball.

Part B
Which of the following is an example of consonance?

A.
The long, lonely lane lingered before them.

B.
Sleepy breezes sweep across the green summer fields.

C.
The water of the pool was cool and soothing.

D.
In the flood, the branches of the dented and bent tree caught litter.

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Answer:

OMG! yes i know everything that i need to know for my STAAR test

Explanation:

brainly really helps

THIS WAS DUE AT 7 AND I DIDN'T KNOW! I NEED HELP ASAP!

The text mentioned is "Freak The Mighty"

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1. indicative
2. interrogative
3. conditional
4. indicative
5. subjunctive
6. imperative
7. interrogative

im not sure lol
freak was adventures and fearless and strong and max was more calm and collected and stay by himself

i really really really need help with this! please, please help! just answer the question, and the best answer gets brainliest. No bots are allowed!

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Answer:

send me another with a better picture

Explanation:

Answer these questions for 50pts....

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44. During World War II, as many as 7,000 detainees and "internees" were held at the Island.

45. Under the Geneva Conventions, war prisoners were permitted to have an advocate speak for them.

46. Once registered, immigrants were free to enter the New World and start their new lives. But if they were sick, they spent days, weeks, months even, in a warren of rooms. Some, like the tuberculosis ward, were open to the sea, where a gentle New York harbor breeze cleansed their lungs, improving their chances. Other rooms were solitary, forlorn places where the illness itself decided when to leave or stay. Most patients in the hospital or Contagious Disease Ward recovered, but some were not so lucky. More than 120,000 immigrants were sent back to their countries of origin, and during the island's half-century of operation more than 3,500 immigrants died there.

47. 350

48. 3,500

49. In 1954, after 62 years of operation, Ellis Island was closed by the Immigration and Naturalization Service. For ten years, the Main Building stood vacant. Vandals made off with anything they could carry, from doorknobs to filing cabinets. Snow swirled through broken windows, roofs leaked, weeds sprang up in corridors, and interior walls soaked up harbor moisture like sponges. In 1965, Ellis Island became part of the Statue of Liberty National Monument, overseen by the National Park Service. Nearly thirty years later, in 1990, the Main Building was fully restored and opened as the Immigration Museum.

These are my best gueses.

Write about two claims President Bush makes in his speech that explain why this piece of legislation will help students. Find the counterclaim and explain it as one of the claims. Use quotation marks around the information you quote from the speech as text evidence. Analyze these claims by writing if they have good evidence to support them.

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Answer:

Explanation:

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The film’s final episode is filled with several stark ironies. List three of the ironies.
The film is boy in the striped pajamas

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Answer:

1. Both boys, Bruno and Shmuel, were born on the same day, and they died on the same day.

2. The father thinks he is killing Polish prisoners, but he unknowingly kills his son with the rest of the people.

I can't think of a third one sorry :(

Explanation:

What is this supposed to be about

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Instructions. Match the term with the correct response. Write the letter of the term by the definition.

a. germination
e. chromosomes
b. seed coat
f. viable
c. endosperm
g. deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA)
d. zygote
h. hybrid

1. Cell produced by union of sperm and egg.

2. Growth of a new plant from a seed or the beginning of growth of the seed.

3. Stored nutritive material in seed; source of energy for the seed.

4. Offspring from genetically different parents.

5. Seed capable of germination.

6. Protective shell surrounding the embryo and endosperm of a seed.

7. Arrangement of genes; made of proteins and nucleic acid and controls cell activity.

8. Long molecular chains that store genetic information in a cell.

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I’m almost finished I’ll see if I can do a picture

Answer:

d

a

c

h

f

b

g

e

Explanation:

Review the first three paragraphs of the passage,
which begin on page 1 and end on page 2. How
are these paragraphs connected to the idea of
the "four essential human freedoms" on
pages 3-4?
They introduce a problem facing the world, and the
four freedoms present a long-term solution.
They suggest one possible course of action for the
United States, while the four freedoms offer an
alternative.
They define the United States' role in the world, and
the four freedoms describe the nation's ideals.
They list the steps of a dictator's rise to power,
while the four freedoms show the path to
democracy

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what is the passage? if you tell me the name i can read it and give you an answer in the comments

Submit a 4–5 paragraph essay that compares and contrasts 1973 Nixon Press Conference Video & Transcript and President Richard M. Nixon: Re-election, Second Term, and Watergate. Draw conclusions from both texts to make your points. Support your statements with quotations and evidence from the texts. Write using clear and varied sentences.

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Answer:

Make research from both given texts. Outline your points from both texts. The evidence you get from both texts must be clear and concise. Avoid the use of ambiguous words. Ensure you proofread your essay after writing.

What is the Essay structure?

Introduction: Introduce the subject of the essay.

Body: Write three paragraphs. In these paragraphs, you will highlight what the press conference represented, show your comparisons between them and the media you analyzed, in addition to showing how Nixon established himself in each one. Do not forget to present data and evidence for the information presented.

Conclusion: Summarize all the information, emphasize the importance of the comparisons you make, and show how important an understanding of this subject is.

Explanation:

The Loss of the SS Titanic" is a _______________ source because....
Group of answer choices

primary; it was written first

primary; Beesley experienced the event

secondary; it was written second

secondary; Beesley researched the event

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Answer:

Primary

Explanation:

Mr. Beesley had been a survivor of the incedent

so number 2

ANSWER
Primary

Beesley one

“If you’re a normal kid, reading this because you think it’s fiction, great. Read on.” What do you Notice about this quote?

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fiction means fake meaning not everyone is normal

Answer:

wait is the form the Percy Jackson Series

Explanation:

please help me tysm!!!! will report if the answer is not acceptable and will give brainliest for correct answer!!!

Using a print source (such as a newspaper or magazine) or the Internet, find visual examples of each of the logical fallacies, that is, advertisements with a picture that illustrates one of the fallacies. Each image should contain text that expresses the particular fallacy.
Explain how that advertisement commits the fallacy.
Discuss why the advertisement contains the fallacy. For example, look at the advertisement below, and the paragraph following it:

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Answer:

ummm where is the paragraph

Drag the sentence with the figurative language that matches the meaning in the chart. 20 points

Don't put random answers Nvm i got the answer

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"but kai sees right through the trick." is the answer.

The answer is, “But Kai sees right through the trick.”

HELP ASAP In what ways are adjectives and adverbs related? Select all that apply.

Adverbs can modify adjectives
Adjectives and adverbs are both modifiers
Adjectives and adverbs both modify nouns
Adding –ly to an adjective changes it to an adverb

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I believe it’s the first option, Adverbs can modify Adjectives (Sorry if I’m wrong!)

Identify and define common types of run-on sentences.

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When you join two complete sentences with a comma instead of a semicolon, without any punctuation at all, or with too many conjunctions, then you most likely have a run-on sentence.

Explanation:

Explanation:

fused sentence two or more complete sentences joined together with no puntuation

comma splices two or more complete sentences joined by just a comma

This is a very silly question but it is a very necessary and reasonable question.

You know how "it's" is short for "it is" and "I'd" is short for "I would"?
Well, what I need to know is the shortened form of "it has".

(Even tho I was taught this in Elementary School, I forgot it and Grammarly was no help because I had to be a Premium Member)

Thank You So Very Much

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Answer: 'It has' is commonly reffered to as it's, so 'it's' is the correct contraction for 'it has'.

Explanation:

It is just how it was contracted

It has ----------It's

Answer:

The same as it is

Explanation:

Which sentence shows an example of a comma used after a direct address?

A) "Jorge, did you go to the store?"

B) "Yes, Jorge went to the store."

C) "No, Jorge has been home all day."

D) Jorge, Sally, and Paul went to the store together.

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

Answer: A) "Jorge, did you go to the store?"

Explanation: "Jorge" is the direct adress, and there is a comma right after it

I think that this is right, but the other answer is giving me doubts, so I would double check with a parent or guardian.

In 1972, five men broke into offices of the Democratic Party in Washington, D.C. Members of the media and Congress connected the burglary to members of President Nixon's reelection campaign. Nixon and his staff denied the accusations and committed illegal acts to hide the truth. As the House of Representatives debated impeaching Nixon, he resigned in disgrace rather than face a vote of impeachment. This episode will forever be known as the Watergate scandal; named after the office building that was burglarized. What is this paragraph mostly about?

A. Impeachment
B. The U.S. congress
C. The Watergate scandal
D. president Nixon ​​

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Its for sure C, his downfall and the reason for the protest against him is because of the watergate scandal

Answer: the watergate scandal

Explanation:

help please

Instructions. Provide the word or words to complete the following statements.

2._____cuttings are made by taking a leaf blade or leaf blade with
petiole attached. They are placed in a growing medium where they are rooted.

3. _____cuttings are made from one-year-old growth from deciduous
or evergreen plants.

4. A good soil media needs to hold_______ and provide good aeration and_____It should also be free from_____and weed seeds.

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answer

Plants is 2

but I don't know the rest

plant




help please

Instructions. Provide the word or words to complete the following statements.

2.____plant_cuttings are made by taking a leaf blade or leaf blade with
petiole attached. They are placed in a growing medium where they are rooted.

3. _____cuttings are made from one-year-old growth from deciduous
or evergreen plants.

4. A good soil media needs to hold_______ and provide good aeration and_____It should also be free from_____and weed seeds.



i needd help plsss number 5

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Answer:

the one that says noun

Explanation:

Answer:

The first one Adjective modifying a noun

What type of rhyme are the words "play" and "today?"

a. half rhyme

b. exact rhyme

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Answer: I think it's an exact rhyme because they sound very alike.

Explanation:

Answer:

exact rhyme

Explanation:

a half rhyme would be words like hill and full, they're close to rhyming, but aren't exact. an exact rhyme sounds exactly the same, like make and bake. the words play and today both end with ay, which is why they are an exact rhyme.

What did Detective Starr discover after running the plate numbers on the Colonel's Thunderbird?


A: The car was really stolen from him.

B: He purchased the car 2 weeks ago, the Colonel lied.

C: It was Mo's car, and Lana can drive it.

D: He really did purchase the car 2 years ago. (Three Times Lucky)

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Answer:

d

Explanation:

The Answer

It is D: he really

Hope this help positive that is the answer

HELLLP NEED THIS DONE BY TODAY

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Answer:

D

Explanation:

probably D sounds like the similarity might be desserts so it's not A or C  

It could be C if the similarity is desserts but C seems to

have less in common than choice D

The right answer is D

John is playing the trumpet with a lot of confidence.

Change this to passive voice.
:)

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The trumpet was played by a confident John.

Answer:

With a lot of confidence, the trumpet is being played by John.

Explanation:

What were the terms of surrender that Grant delivered to Lee?

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The union general granted Lee favorable terms of surrender allowing the men to return to their homes and letting the officers cavalrymen, and artillery men keep their swords and horses if the men agree to lay down their arms and abide by federal law

Hope this helps :3
the union granted lee favorable things

Do you think it’s wrong for Jess to be glad to be alone with Miss Edmunds? Do you think he should have thought of asking if Leslie could come with them when she had called? Why or why not?

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Answer:

the answer is in thelink

Explanation:

Yeah it’s wrong and he should have asked because what if Leslie is Jess best friend and it is just really sad and you know it is rude to go hang out with someone and not telling your friends or lying to them that pull be really sad
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